I’m sorry for the delayed message since I’ve been busy preparing for my thesis this month. I’m glad to tell you that I’ve accepted the offer from King’s College London. To be honest, I don’t have much confidence in myself at the beginning of my application process since I’m transferring my major from Foreign Diplomacy to International Marketing. However, after communicating with you about my strongest strengths, I’m braver to unfold my passion and love for this new subject through my internship and reading of professional literature.
During the revision process, you always reply to me on time and answer every question asked by me. Reviewing the revisions of these 11 documents reminds me of your professional work throughout the 3 months. I appreciate your kind tone when communicating with me, your clear logic when revising my document, and your warm encouragement when I encounter with difficulty.
Without your help, I don’t think I can learn not only how to attract the admissions officer but also how to communicate my passion and suitability for a specific programme as well as a job in the future.
I want to thank you for everything you’ve done to help me, and I wish to work with you again or visit you in USA or Korea in the near future. Wish you all the best luck and success in your life.
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申请季最幸运的事情，就是遇到芝士圈
写下这个标题，感觉像是个硬广，但真真切切是我的肺腑之言。从在论坛上看到有人说MyDocumate是超级良心文书修改平台，到预约Tom学长做留学咨询，全程干货而且完全不像别的平台，聊完就各种变相逼着学生买套餐，Tom一直是说可以选择适合自己的项目，完全没有强买强卖感，反而让人炒鸡信任和喜欢芝士圈了。
后来，我不慎选择了其他平台做了超贵还没啥用的选校，几乎对各种平台失去信心的时候，看到了芝士圈奖学金的项目。一直想DIY省钱+锻炼自己，想试试能不能拿到芝士圈的梦想学员，虽然感觉自己是在做梦，但还是认真准备了面试。没想到真的选中了我，当时真的超级感恩，被其他平台搞到失望和焦头烂额的时候，是芝士圈在申请季给了我一剂强心针。
主导师Luna，是效率超高人又温柔的 IC学姐，选校那段时间，学姐和我一起筛选了几天几夜，看到后来我打开各种学校官网都晕眩的时候，学姐还是专业的帮我分析哪个适合我之后的职业道路，哪个地理位置更好适合实习，当时就完全被折服了。文书挖掘的时候，因为不知道如何把职业规划和想选的项目结合起来，问了Luna特别多关于未来职业选择的问题，Luna超级耐心而且很专业，让我在文书阶段的思路更加清晰。
文书修改套餐设计非常合理，每次文书导师只要回复我，我在手机的公众平台上就会收到提示，有特别棘手的问题也可以在手机上直接回复老师，让我和导师之间沟通更加高效。
网站真的是越来越美腻啦，我最喜欢这种简单快捷的设计了，橙色的主色调也超喜欢，过年的时候还做了飘来飘去的财神，奖学金阶段也有设计散落的金币吧我记得，主菜单和每个模块点进去的页面也比我最开始看到的时候美观和清晰了，总之表白辛苦的程序员嘻嘻嘻！
除了一站式，还参加了超多芝士圈的讲座，还有offer的抽奖，所有遇到的芝士圈工作人员都是认真负责又可爱。特别是我的辅导员Hermione，网申过程中遇到的所有细碎的小问题，辅导员总是特别及时就回复，而且每一条都很清晰很细致。在和文书老师沟通的时候，每次都能作为中间人传达最准确的信息。最关键的是，在我连连被拒的低谷时刻，一直鼓励我激励我，是我申请季最值得依赖的人了，感恩！！！
申请季是漫长而使人成长的时期，酸甜苦辣DIY的小伙伴们最清楚，但真的是因为有芝士圈，让我觉得这个成长的过程有人陪伴、帮助，这种温暖而靠谱的感觉，实在是太幸福了。
认识你们真好啊！希望芝士圈的每位staff都能开开心心，健健康康！希望芝士圈越来越好呀！
Dear Hee Jin
I’m sorry for the delayed message since I’ve been busy preparing for my thesis this month. I’m glad to tell you that I’ve accepted the offer from King’s College London. To be honest, I don’t have much confidence in myself at the beginning of my application process since I’m transferring my major from Foreign Diplomacy to International Marketing. However, after communicating with you about my strongest strengths, I’m braver to unfold my passion and love for this new subject through my internship and reading of professional literature.
During the revision process, you always reply to me on time and answer every question asked by me. Reviewing the revisions of these 11 documents reminds me of your professional work throughout the 3 months. I appreciate your kind tone when communicating with me, your clear logic when revising my document, and your warm encouragement when I encounter with difficulty.
Without your help, I don’t think I can learn not only how to attract the admissions officer but also how to communicate my passion and suitability for a specific programme as well as a job in the future.
I want to thank you for everything you’ve done to help me, and I wish to work with you again or visit you in USA or Korea in the near future. Wish you all the best luck and success in your life.
Yours sincerely,
Shirley