Your revision is amazing!!! I can hardly improve it better!!! Now I have more confidence in my UC application.

Nickla provided a smooth and excellent service on my vision statement, big thanks!

Thank you, Dan! I'm happy with the final paperwork. Dan gave me a lot of great advice. It was a pleasure to work with you.

Hi George, Thank you for your excellent edit and kind comments. I really enjoyed to work with you! -- Tianyu

师姐非常耐心，也给了很多有用的建议，帮我梳理了ps的框架，确定了素材的内容，超级感谢！

In the first version, Emily asked me many questions, so I could add lots of details. In the beginning, I didn't have any ideas. I could only describe some past experiences. After the first edition, I began to have some consciousness about the framework of the writing. Emily gave good advice on how to integrate and reconstruct the article. I appreciated her help and efforts.

Jakob非常的专业！他提供的建议非常有针对性，将文书提高了很多level！对内容的修改也是非常细心。我对我的申请有了更大的信心！强烈推荐！

Diane is very helpful and professional with the editing and she offers great suggestions on possible improvements. Great work!

Cathy超温柔哒，对G5商科很有了解~尤其是自己想重点申请的管理学方向，Cathy对于各所学校的课程设置及侧重点均进行了详细深入的介绍。对学校和专业的选择非常有帮助，极力推荐！

Runke人好好噢，很温柔也很耐心，沟通起来非常没有距离感~有关选校的建议给了我勇气去试试更好的学校( •̀ ω •́ ) 对我的文书构思和修改也提了很多很有用且专业的意见！非常感谢啦~

Thank you so much for providing all the suggestion, it's been really helpful and productive. It's my pleasure to work with you.

学姐超强，给了很多中肯的建议，很推荐！冲top的一定记得选她！

Thank you so much for saving my essay. I really appreciate that you keep the metaphor at the beginning. Now I have more confidence in applying undecided major.

George is very good at editing, elaborating on original drafts and integrating feedbacks into the article.

学长人超级耐心仔细！！分析的非常客观到位！推荐给大家！！！

非常专业靠谱，对MEIM的各方面都做了非常细致的介绍。干货十足而且不拖泥带水，直截了当挑重点讲。

George asked a bunch of clarification questions that I found super helpful. He really helped to polish my experience, language, and logic flows. Also, he is very efficient and easy to communicate with. Definitely recommend!!

Jakob is willing to give a bunch of advice. In the first place, I had written a personal statement with heave contents of around 1200 words but with messy structure,. Jacob propose a clear structure to me with detailed explanations and guided me to revise my draft.
In the end, the article looks much nicer and the wording revised by Jacob brings the statement to a higher level.

学长超级nice！技术背景很强，和我分享了自己申请的经验以及data science的行业信息。帮我分析了我个人的背景建立信心，希望以后有机会还能和学长合作~

和Cathie的聊天非常愉快，得到很多选校方法与经验提醒，Cathie是对待咨询和工作一样认真的人，不管详细回答了我的问题，还针对我的申请偏好，以及她的经验，结合我的背景，整理了文档给我，太贴心了，在申请期迷茫的朋友值得和Cathie聊一下！