Great service. George is a very efficient and friendly adviser. He carefully read my comments and suggestions and gave relevant feedback. He did not change the focus of your PS but modified your expressions in a good way. There was little change in the overall flow of my PS and instead lots of changes in structure of sentences. I wasn't very impressed by his first draft because he deleted some parts I really like! Yet I'm satisfied with the last one and it is much better than the original one. Based on my opinions, he used better language and vocabulary to improve my PS. Generally, my edited PS has a stronger focus and more natural expression with no grammar mistake.
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团购很划算。其实第一稿删掉点自己的废话更省钱哈。ps修改下发现还是很值得的，自己diy也比中介更用心。
Great service. George is a very efficient and friendly adviser. He carefully read my comments and suggestions and gave relevant feedback. He did not change the focus of your PS but modified your expressions in a good way. There was little change in the overall flow of my PS and instead lots of changes in structure of sentences. I wasn't very impressed by his first draft because he deleted some parts I really like! Yet I'm satisfied with the last one and it is much better than the original one. Based on my opinions, he used better language and vocabulary to improve my PS. Generally, my edited PS has a stronger focus and more natural expression with no grammar mistake.