Your revisions are pretty good, but I think the outline could be improved: concentrate more on the important qualities (creativity and critical thinking, then research experience) and arrange the order according to the importance. Anyway, your revisions are satisfactory! Thank you.
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Dear Austin,
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Sue
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Your revisions are pretty good, but I think the outline could be improved: concentrate more on the important qualities (creativity and critical thinking, then research experience) and arrange the order according to the importance. Anyway, your revisions are satisfactory! Thank you.