Henry provided great help to my personal statement in its language. I think some sentences are better organized and some words are replaced with more appropriate ones. My expectation was to improve the expressions to make the whole personal statement more natural in its language. I believe Henry helped me with it and I want to thank him for his works!
Additionally, Henry finished this work efficiently. He quickly gave me the feedback online.
I want to recommend Henry here~
Thank you very much for your kind review! - very best of luck with your application!