Iracema really cared about my drafts and what message I'd like to convey through the words - I could feel that. And I appreciate your help with those long sentences and your helping organize my thoughts! Wish you all the best for the rest of this year:)
Thanks for being straightforward with my first draft:) That attitude really prompted me to reconsider the structure of my article and to understand what they want from the statement
列表里看到很多顾问感觉经历合适但是很多人都不可选而且不知道我这辈子(误)还能不能选到他们了…相信我不是一个人
嘤!因为顾问都是兼职哒,他们会根据自己哒时间来调整是否接单,所以有时候可能小伙伴需要的时候他们刚好无法提供服务,就这样……擦肩而过 T.T
个例 - 如果第一稿有欠缺,他会比较直接的指出来,然后如果想要认真揣摩他的建议并且仔细修改的话还是要动一(hen)些(duo)脑子...但是如果能花时间思考而且两个人能互相get到对方思路,可以感觉到他确实比较用心,而且终稿确实有很大提高~
An experienced and to-the-point advisor. Pleasant to work seriously with. Glad that I found you - many thanks Henry!
Thank you very much for your kind review! - very best of luck with your application!
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Iracema really cared about my drafts and what message I'd like to convey through the words - I could feel that. And I appreciate your help with those long sentences and your helping organize my thoughts! Wish you all the best for the rest of this year:)
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Thanks for being straightforward with my first draft:) That attitude really prompted me to reconsider the structure of my article and to understand what they want from the statement
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I now realize my first draft was quite off-the-point..Many thanks Angela for saving it back as much as you could!!
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