Very lucky to receive Henry's help again.
Actually, I really appreciate your change, especially the rebreaking of my paragraph. It makes my PS more coherent and be native standard, which I expect to get.
Good job!
Very nice.
However, You suggest that I should write some “attractive”introduction as a hook, actually I choose this master programme just because I think this media technique is very interesting and I also do not have a brief career goal, so...
Over all, it's a nice job, your modifying indeed improve my document's logic and makes it more native. Thank you!
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Very lucky to receive Henry's help again.
Actually, I really appreciate your change, especially the rebreaking of my paragraph. It makes my PS more coherent and be native standard, which I expect to get.
Good job!
Thank you very much for your kind review Chan! Very best of luck with your application!
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Very nice.
However, You suggest that I should write some “attractive”introduction as a hook, actually I choose this master programme just because I think this media technique is very interesting and I also do not have a brief career goal, so...
Over all, it's a nice job, your modifying indeed improve my document's logic and makes it more native. Thank you!