外籍文书答疑丨如何证明我挑选的项目和大学可以提供我想要的?
2019-10-24
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俄勒冈大学, International Business
While working in the Office of International Admissions at Oregon State University, I helped hundreds of students through the US university application process. My experience being on the admissions committee that reviewed applicants gave me great insight to what US universities are looking for in an international candidate. Additionally, I have worked for over five years as an English teacher, enhancing my writing and language abilities. I’m excited to use my strong communication skills and university admissions knowledge to help you prepare an application that gets you accepted to your ideal program! 在俄勒冈州立大学国际招生办公室工作期间,我帮助数百名学生完成了美国大学申请流程。招生委员会工作的经历让我对美国大学录取国际申请者的偏好有了深入了解。此外,我担任英语老师5年有余,这段工作经历让我的写作和语言能力得到了提升。我很高兴能利用我的沟通技巧和大学招生经验来帮助您准备留学申请材料,辅助您拿到梦校的录取。

问答整理自芝士圈外籍文书答疑。

问:嗨,alison我想问一下,如何证明我挑选的项目和大学可以提供我想要的。

答:嗨yumi!这是个好问题!很多人似乎都对这个问题很困惑而且这在申请中其实是非常重要的。

首先,我认为有一点很重要,那就是在你的目标中强调你需要克服哪些限制来实现这些目标。

然后当你谈到学校时,你可以把你需要的和他们提供的联系起来。一定要详细了解学校提供的课程,包括他们的课程方式、动手经验、教授资源、研究类型,并说明为什么这对你很重要。这个理由不能模糊不清,比如说这个课程能给我提供更多的知识等等,因为这个理由在招生官看来是千篇一律的,没有指向性的,更是显而易见的。你应该更深入的挖掘并且告诉招生官为什么这门课值得你花大篇幅在essay中展示。我希望这能有所帮助!!

以下为英文原文,以供参考~

Q:
Hi Allison! I have a question that how to demonstrate that the program and university I chose can offer exactly I want.

A:
Hi Yumi! Great question! This is something a lot of people seem to struggle with and it is so important. First I think it is great to highlight in your goals, what limitations you need to overcome to reach these goals. Then when you talk about the university you can draw connections between what you need and what they offer. Be sure to get specific about what the university offers, cover their curriculum approach, hands-on experience, professors, research and make the connection to why it is important to you. Don’t let your reason be vague like, this course will provide me with more knowledge in…. because that is obvious! You want to go deeper and show why that course is worth highlighting in your essay! I hope this helps!!

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