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PS制造、锻造、再造

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  • 课程简述: 伦敦政治经济学院人类学在读,曾在递交申请后一周内拿下KCL、UCL offer,圣诞节前拿到LSE全网第一批offer(前10%)。如果你想对手中的PS进行质的提升,却又毫无头绪陷入瓶颈,那么来找我吧!我会逐句地帮你修改删减理清思路,从而让你知道PS怎样的风格,结构,语言逻辑可以令招生官青睐有加。不论你是什么专业,只要你有一个他乡留学梦,我愿意全程见证你梦想的实现。
  • 适用用户: 针对申请英国高校or 其它Top名校的本科生(人文社科,商科)

 

  • 电话沟通前,请将详细的个人经历,文书初稿及所要咨询的问题发给我(准备阶段)
  • 分享个人PS心得,如G5招生官最喜欢的PS风格?结构?(10min)
  • 文书总体评价并指出不足之处(10min)
  • 修改并调整文书的整体架构和思路,细化到每个段落的中心思想,提取个人经历的精华与相关思考(30-40min)
  • 最后十分钟可以回答客户提出的任何与申请相关的问题(10-15min)

 

通过此次服务,我可以让你明白招生官最心仪的PS应该是什么样子的,并尽最大的能力给你的文书奠定最好的基础。

 

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一个学姐的血泪史--雅思PTE攻略

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向伦敦政治经济学院,伦敦大学,伦敦国王学院宣战!---G5申请指导

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  • 课程简述: 老学姐将从亲身经历、体验的角度,分享以上三所大学的择偶标准,申请特点,申请时间,申请材料的准备工作,其重要性及重要性排序,以及,最重要的,帮助你在海选中脱颖而出的申请tips!
  • 适用用户: 针对想要申请英国高校的本科生(人文社科,商科)

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如果你们要问我英国留学最重要的part是什么,我会毫不犹豫的告诉你是PS的撰写。大学期间,我从来没有拿过任何校级以上奖学金,也没有金光闪闪的实习履历,但我却在全部递交申请材料后,三天拿到伦敦国王学院和伦敦大学offer,十二天,也是全网第一批,全校第一个拿到了伦敦政经offer,对此,我知道,是我的PS为我打下了九成的江山。

本人的PS更改次数不少于三十遍,期间请教授们帮忙修改不少于五次。最幸运的莫过于和我关系很好的一位老师还帮我联系了一位曾做过牛津招生官的教授,将我的PS做了大刀阔斧的修改。也是在这期间,我知道了一份最好的PS应该是什么模样。

作为一个深知市面上的中介有多不靠谱的过来人,我曾帮身边十多位惨遭中介蹂躏过的朋友修改过PS和CV,加上她们后续的努力,五位本来在伦敦政经,伦敦大学的waiting list里的朋友都成功转正了,而其余的朋友也都陆续申请到了她们最心仪的大学。

当然,如果你对申请的过程或者其它材料有疑虑,对雅思和PTE的复习不知如何下手,我都会耐心,细致的与你讲解。

教育经历

教育

The London School of Economics and Political Science (LSE)

Master China in Comparative Perspective
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The London School of Economics and Political Science (LSE)

Master anthropology
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University of Nottingham, China

Bachelor International Studies with French
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University of Nottingham, China

Bachelor International Studies with French
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经历

Research Intern

Archetype Consulting
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Followed the tracks of industry dynamics and hotspot Information, compilied industry reports, news and other related work

Researcher Intern

Jilin Province Academy of Social Science
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Participated in a core research project and personally performed collecting, collating, and translating of documents relating to Japan and North Korea.
Attended the ‘China – Japan - South Korea Academic Exchange Meeting’.

Research Assistant

School of Social Science, University of Nottingham
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Assisted tutors with academic projects relating to responsibility to protect and transnational politics.
Analyzed practice and impact of R2P’s third pillar, researched transnational politics in relation to the Canadian Province of Manitoba and collected over 2500 pieces of document literature before classifying and summarizing.
Fully engaged with the learning process of exploring new academic topics, developed analytical skills and cultivated advanced aptitude for critical thinking.

Research Intern

Inlair Group
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Followed the tracks of industry dynamics and hotspot Information, compilied industry reports, news and other related work.
Assisted the company's WeChat Subscription writing, modifying and typesetting, maintained the timely updating of the content of company’s brochures, PPT, etc.

Finance Management Intern

Shanghai Pudong Development Bank
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Worked in relation to personal financial services and audited cooperative enterprises’ financial statements.
Evaluated and forecasted over 10 cooperative enterprises’ operating results, financial statuses, profitability and solvency.

Volunteer and Team Leader

Sri Lanka International Teaching
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Organized, managed and coordinated volunteer work for a team of 15 students, dealt with problems and created effective solutions.
Taught English and Math to around 100 students at a local international school.
Obtained Certificate of Outstanding Volunteer based on the overall satisfaction of students and school staff.

Minister for the Department of Design

Students’ Union, Ningbo Campus
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Maintained the workflow of the university’s internal products, including souvenirs and clothing.
Took part in numerous product-related stages including design, external purchasing and selling.
Achieved impressive sales of over 20 types of products and more than 500 items in total.

获奖 & 荣誉

Head’s Scholarship

University of Nottingham, China

Dean’s Scholarship

University of Nottingham, China

Dean’s Scholarship

University of Nottingham, China

Best Intern

Inlair Group

Excellent Student Leader

University of Nottingham, China

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