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博士服务

Score
4.97 / 5

Review Distribution

4.97

473 reviews

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98.1%

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Reviews
471
Clients
3601
Promptness
100%

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Summary

I am glad that so many outstanding Chinese students want to come and study in the UK and other countries, and I am glad to help. I have assisted clients with applications to over 80 different universities in a dozen Asian, European and North American countries, including successful applications to most of the world's top-20 ranked universities. I graduated from the London School of Economics and have 35 years' experience drafting and editing CVs, reports, leaflets, information for Ministers, citizens, and the media. I now work as an employment coach, helping people find jobs; I drive elderly people to a day centre; assist hospital patients; and am a countryside volunteer, coppicing woodlands, laying hedges and protecting natural habitats.

Self Introduction

I studied at Bryanston School before gaining a first class honours degree in French and German at the Polytechnic of Central London and an MSc(Econ.) at LSE. I studied at Tubingen and Lille Universities as part of my PCL degree course. I know how rewarding it can be to live and study abroad.

I worked in a Devon pie factory for a year before joining the Department of the Environment where I managed contracts, negotiated and implemented European Union environmental regulations, and advised Ministers on housing, environmental and other issues. I introduced changes to council tenants' right to buy their home, saving municipalities over £100 million a year. I managed or mentored staff seeking to develop their career, and ended as redeployment manager at the Department of Energy and Climate Change, helping staff to find new jobs or careers.

I currently assist hospital patients with feeding and conversation, advise job seekers, work with Bromley Countryside Volunteers, and work with Age UK driving elderly people to a day centre in the minibus, serving lunch and playing games which they mostly win.

We have two daughters, a doctor and a scientific publishing assistant. I have many Chinese relatives many of whom came from Hong Kong to study or work in the UK.

I look forward to helping you succeed in your university application.

Standard Service

教育经历

Education

London School of Economics

Master Economics: European integration

1976-09 ~ 1977-06

Polytechnic of Central London (now, Westminster University)

Bachelor modern languages

1971-09 ~ 1975-06

Experience

patient befriender volunteer

King's College Hospital NHS Foundation Trust

2020-01 ~ current

proofreader

ZigZag Education

2014-08 ~ 2014-10

volunteer employment coach

Careers Development Group / Shaw Trust / Bromley Council / Phoenix Community Housing

2013-03 ~ 2020-07

volunteer

Bromley Countryside Volunteers

2012-10 ~ current

Fellow

Royal Geographical Society

1978-08 ~ current

policy advisor / policy manager / redeployment manager

Department of the Environment / Department of Energy and Climate Change

1977-10 ~ 2012-06

各项能力

适用用户类型

博士
硕士
本科
其他

Areas of Expertise

615 Finance
379 Economics
342 Accounting, auditing, financial management
211 Business Administration/MBA
196 Business Analysis
178 Strategic Management
159 Marketing
114 Public Policy / Public Administration
110 Computer Science/Engineering
102 Financial Engineering
82 Media and Journalism
53 Statistics
50 Sociology
49 Law
48 Data Science
47 Film & Television
40 Operations research, supply chain management, logistics management
40 Management Information System
38 Architecture
27 Human Resource Management
27 Operation Management

* 数据来源于该顾问服务订单所属专业的分类汇总

服务评价

4.97

Review Distribution473 reviews

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98.6%

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Serve Attitude

4.98

Professional Rate

4.98

Punctuality Rate

4.98

Niancheng Jiang Nov 15, 2018

Resumes Heavy Edit Finance

Dear supervisor,
Thank you so much for the constructive advice and modification of my CV. All of your work have helped me a lot! It is pretty lucky for me to be mentored by you. I wish you all the best!
Very best wishes,
Niancheng Jiang
Fred Nov 14, 2018

Graduate Personal Statement VIP Service Economics

写的东西根本没法用，烂，烂到无以复加
- 小笛
  
  小伙伴好，
  我是芝士圈留学用户体验中心负责人Nydia，非常感谢小伙伴的信任选择了芝士圈留学，首先也给小伙伴简单的介绍下VIP服务哈，VIP问卷中涉及到的小伙伴的个人经历，是会引用在大纲中的，而大纲就是顾问针对小伙伴的个人经历和要申请的项目进行进行亮点挖掘和文章逻辑结构组织，所以会不避免的引用到您问卷中的答案；关于小伙伴说到顾问忽略了您提到的几个修改点，一般来说，顾问的修改方向是有利于小伙伴的申请的，如果顾问认为不利于申请，一般就会不采纳了哈，可能是顾问没有跟您解释这一点，让您以为顾问是没有处理，以及最后的两条消息顾问遗漏，这点确实是顾问的失误。我们向您表示歉意。
  其次，在以上问题的基础上，您反馈顾问的稿件有问题并且不愿意和原顾问沟通的情况下，我们开启了售后流程，请我们资深的售后顾问重新审核并且根据小伙伴反馈的问题做了两稿新的修改，也希望小伙伴能配合给出更多的信息帮助修改，但是很遗憾，小伙伴对于新的稿件一直没有给予正面回复。刚刚我们也给您解释了VIP服务过程的问题哈，所以如果可以的话，还是希望小伙伴能阅读一下审核顾问给出的稿件，希望对您的申请有帮助，如果您对稿件有任何质量上的疑问，具体不满意的点，以及认为修改不合适的点，都欢迎和我们的审核顾问进行探讨，芝士圈在任何时候都会对自己修改的文书质量负责。毕竟我们的最终目的都是一样的，都是为了更好的申请。
  谢谢小伙伴！
  祝申请顺利，
  芝士圈留学 Nydia
Jinyang Liu Nov 10, 2018

Graduate Recommendation Letter Baseline Edit Economics

I showed the Recommodation Letter revised by Adam to my proforssor, and we are both satisfied with it. Thanks for Adam's help!
Yu Nov 2, 2018

Graduate Essay Baseline Edit Economics

Hi Adam,
Sorry for the lateness. Thanks a lot for editing two essays for me. I'll let you know if I ever got admitted! Hope you have a great weekend.
Echo Huang Oct 30, 2018

Resumes Baseline Edit Finance

感觉收获和价格不是非常成正比，新的版本中依然发现一些小错误，一般般吧感觉
- 芝士圈留学 Marco
  
  Hi 小伙伴是哪里发现问题啦？如果确实有问题的话欢迎跟顾问沟通哒！我们是一定会保证服务的质量哒！快来跟俺说说问题叭！ 😁
Janet Oct 30, 2018

Graduate Statement of Purpose Heavy Edit Economics

Thanks for the help from Adam who is really professional. He is also a patient person and takes time to let me think more detailed and further.
elaine Oct 29, 2018

Graduate Personal Statement Heavy Edit Economics

Hi, adam, I really really really appreciate your help and I am very satisfied with the revise. Thank you again and best wishes.