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UNIT 2——如何撰写完美的商科申请文书?

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  • 课程简述: Writing the Perfect Business School Statement & Essays
  • 适用用户: Students contemplating or already engaged in the process of applying to business school for an MBA or PhD program

In this course, we will discuss:

•The purpose of the statements and essays, and specifically what the admissions committee is looking for from the applicant.

•The key elements applicants should include in their submission, drawing from their story (background, interests, talents, goals).

•Acceptable styles, formats, and tone specific to business school and common mistakes to avoid.

•How to properly research the school and demonstrate how your story and values fit with the school’s program and culture.

Regardless of the format (essay, statement of purpose, motivation letter, etc.) the written submission to business school is your opportunity to tell your story and explain how the experience, qualifications, recommendations, and other parts of your application fit together. You may also highlight your strengths and explain any deficiencies. After developing the story framework in Unit 1, we will discuss how to package your narrative into a form that will make your argument flow logically and make a compelling case for admission. Special emphasis is given to researching the school and understanding how to talk about fit (because most applicants struggle with this part).

UNIT OUTCOMES

By the end of the course, you will have a deeper understanding of the purpose and key components of the statement and narrative and be well-equipped to outline your written submission. Students will be able to effectively research their top schools, and begin to argue how their story fits the school’s program.

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导论——商学院申请概述,如何从众多申请者中脱颖而出?

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  • 课程简述: Getting Started: Developing Your Business School Application Strategy
  • 适用用户: Students who want to apply for Business School
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UNIT 1——如何剖析自我,用你自己的故事打动招生官?

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  • 课程简述: Developing Your Story to Get Accepted to Business School
  • 适用用户: Students contemplating or already engaged in the process of applying to business school for an MBA or PhD program
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UNIT 3——如何写出优秀的简历?

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  • 课程简述: Writing the Perfect Business School CV/Resume
  • 适用用户: Students contemplating or already engaged in the process of applying to business school for an MBA or PhD program
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UNIT 4——如何选择推荐人并拿到强有力的推荐信?

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  • 课程简述: Obtaining Winning Recommendations
  • 适用用户: Students contemplating or already engaged in the process of applying to business school for an MBA or PhD program
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UNIT 5——商科申请面试指导

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  • 课程简述: Mastering the Business School Interview
  • 适用用户: Students contemplating or already engaged in the process of applying to business school for an MBA or PhD program
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  • 课程简述: Mastering the Business School Application
  • 适用用户: Students contemplating or already engaged in the process of applying to business school for an MBA or PhD program

自我介绍

自我介绍

For 20 years, I have helped people tell their stories. I began my career as a consultant at a top U.S. public relations firm in New York City. I coached senior-level  executives at Fortune 500 companies, as well as several Chinese firms, on business communications. In 2009, I earned my MBA from UCLA and started a consulting firm specializing in corporate training and instructional design. In addition to my volunteer work for UCLA admissions, I routinely serve as a judge for business case competitions at the business school. I also evaluate capstone projects for undergraduate students in the economics department.  When I am not working or volunteering, I enjoy spending time in the outdoors, camping, hiking and exploring nature. I also love to travel. Several years ago, I was able to spend a summer in China touring major cities and teaching an English course in Harbin. I enjoy learning about China's rich history and culture, and meeting its amazing people. I look forward to meeting you! 


20年来,我一直在帮助人们讲述他们的故事。我的职业生涯始于在纽约市一家美国顶级公关公司担任顾问。我曾为财富500强公司以及几家中国公司的高管提供商务沟通方面的培训。2009年,我在加州大学洛杉矶分校(UCLA)获得了MBA学位,并成立了一家专门从事企业培训和教学设计的咨询公司。除了为加州大学洛杉矶分校的招生做志愿者工作外,我还经常在商学院担任商业案例竞赛的评委。我也为经济系的本科生评估顶点项目。当我不工作或做志愿者的时候,我喜欢花时间在户外,野营,徒步旅行和探索自然。我也喜欢旅行。几年前,我在中国度过了一个夏天,游览了一些主要城市,并在哈尔滨教授英语课程。我喜欢了解中国丰富的历史和文化,结识了很多热情的中国人民。很期待与您合作!

教育经历

教育

University of California, Los Angeles

MBA Business Administration
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Washington & Lee University

Bachelor Business Administration
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经历

Advisor

Aurerra Advisors
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Executive Vice President

Abernathy MacGregor Group
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Analyst

Meyers Group
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  • Jialei
    Jialei Mar 17, 2021
    外籍模拟面试服务 工商管理/MBA

    Daniel is super nice and professional! He gave me many useful advices and proofread my drafts for interview, which helps me a lot! Wish you all the best Dan!

  • Yitong
    Yitong Apr 27, 2020
    外籍模拟面试服务 创业学

    Thank you for your help! I think we utilized time effectively and your suggestions were really helpful.

    • DANIEL C头像
      Daniel C

      Thanks Yitong. I always try to work efficiently and deliver the best results for my clients. Best of luck to you!

  • Jinrong
    Jinrong Jan 30, 2020
    外籍模拟面试服务 商业分析

    Daniel是一个非常好的导师。作为一个经验丰富的面试官,他在mock过程中不仅会给我表现的评价,还会帮我提供一些思路。同时他还会提到一些面试官有时会问的tricky question。结束之后,还会提供详细的笔记!非常推荐这位导师!在面试前mock一下不仅能知道自己哪里不足,也能缓解一下紧张的心情~

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